00:22 Sounds good leading in
00:45 Good kicks bringing in melody and rhythm
01:10 Subtle switchup into a new bassline
But I really don't hear anything but pads, bass, and drum samples.
Where's the focus and energy? It all sounds ambient.
When I say focus - chord progression and some really "punchy" sounds help. There's a lot to be learned from aptly called "leads". xD
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Yeah, that's where I'm at trying to think of new sounds to incorporate to give more subsistence. Thanks for the comments
The piano scale in the middle seems a tad off, it seemed rather happy and adverse to the rest of the song ( don't mean the string in the beginning).
But I'm just nitpicking, I like it. :]
I see what you mean, thank you. :)
I love the sound. Although I hear just 2 instruments - the keys and the drums.
Which isn't a bad thing in itself, I just kept expecting to hear more expansion. But that's just me.
Very good indeed.
:D
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback!
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